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Mika Shizu
Kakato
Posts : 11
Stats : 4699
 |  Subject: Shizu, Mika  Wed Jul 06, 2011 12:05 pm | |
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Character ApplicationMIKA SHIZU
 PURAN
Age |
Gender |
Race |
16 |
female |
Hairan |
Aptitudes Ability:
her abilitys are as fallows,she can fly couse of her half phonix ablitltys to fly and she can use fire to her will.
Specialty:
fire
Weakness:
water amd earth
Weapons: a fire sword Characteristics: Personality: she is a shy and quiet person who is always seen and not herd she it temid but will fight if needed and isent good at makeing friends
Likes: hight alttatudes and quiet places
Dislikes: loude places and mean and rude people
Fears: being alone and beiing the only one of her kind
History: she has no family ,her family was killed when she was 10.she was never good with the other kids so they would pick one her daily.she was attacted by land creaches when she lost her family.she has been on her owne ever sence and traviles the world.she hopes in finding one day more of her kind or finding a friend or one day more.she trye to open up to other but has a hard time doing so.
Other Characters: none
Last edited by mika on Sat Jul 09, 2011 12:38 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
|  | | Ryenne Avon
Atama
 Posts : 1771
Stats : 7409
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: Shizu, Mika Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:29 am | |
| Hello and thank you for registering at Kuroi Seken.
Before your character is approved, there are some
small tweeks that we'd like you to look over. Please be sure to specify under "Race" what type of Puran she is. Also please take another look at her abilities. Although enhanced, there are some that are very strong and a little too close to godmodding. I would suggest to keep her abilities down to being able to fly as well as fire manipulation. | |
| | | | Mika Shizu
Kakato
Posts : 11
Stats : 4699
| | Subject: Re: Shizu, Mika Fri Jul 08, 2011 6:30 pm | |
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| | | | Ryenne Avon
Atama
Posts : 1771
Stats : 7409
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: Shizu, Mika Sat Jul 09, 2011 1:47 pm | |
| Please be sure to go back and reread your application, I have applied the proper changes in the proper places.
ACCEPTED | |
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